The Beach: Literate

This is how this game works: A person will start off the story and then other people will post to make the rest of the story.

Rules:
-Do not post more than 3 sentences in one post.
-Do not post right after you posted.
-All posts must be appropriate and G-Rated!!
-You cannot change or edit your posts
-Be creative!
-Have fun!!

Makenzie felt the sand in between her toes, as she walked onto the beach.

The waves where crashing hard all around her and the tide was coming in when she saw the helpless boy stuck in the tide.

She walked over to the boy to help him.

she threw the boy a life raft (my insane story telling skill lol jk jk)

The boy grabbed the life raft, and Makenzie pulled him.

Once He Was Pulled In They Started Talking

She saw something gray sticking out of the water. "Oh no!" she screamed, "Shark!"

The 'Shark' Swam Closer untill it was right in front of Makenzie but it wasn't a shark it was the boys brother

he was wereing a shark costume and said his name bas wall-e (lol)

Walley jumped out of the water and Makenzie saw that he was wearing a shark costume. They all laughed. They were talking, and decided to get an ice cream together.

Walley tried to grab Makenzie's hand but she pulled it away and put her ice cream in his face.

wall-e (u all spelled it wrong i was spellig it the same way like they do in the new disney movie "wall-e" with that little robot thing lol) got mad but then he started laughing because its hard not to laugh when u have ice cream all over your face

Then Wall-e licked the ice cream off of his face and started lauging some more. They all started talking. They both introduced themselves.

After they did Makenzie asked them if they wanted to build a sand castle with her.

Aaron, Wall-e, and Makenzie started making a really cool sand castle. They made rooms and everything! A lot of people stopped by and told them that they should enter in the local Sand Castle Building Competition.

Then they were all happy. Then they decided to make a human size, rooms and kitchens and everything thats in a house! Even stairs!

They Built a sand castle and a crab came and bit Makenzie's nose.

Makenzie didn't try to cry much, because she didn't want to be embarassed. She secretly like this Aaron guy.

He had blonde, curly hair, and hazel colored eyes. He was like a sunshine! Makenzie sighed because she knew no guy like that would like her. "It's just like me to find a guy too perfect for me," she grumbled to herself.

So she kept her feelings secret, still not crying. "Are you okay?" Aaron asked. "It just hurts a little, but I'm fine" Makenzie said as Aaron helped her up.

Aaron asked Makenzie if she wanted to come over to his house later. Makenzie tried to act cool even tho she was freaking out, and said yes.

While they were walking to Aaron's house he asked,"Do you have a boyfriend?"

Makenzie felt exciment in her as she said "No"

"Good because my brother was looking for a girlfriend!" Aaron said smiling. Makenzie just stared at him with her mouth gaped open. "I thought you were going to ask me for you to be your girlfriend!" Makenzie blurted.